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Scum Systems Double Point Package!

Summary:

With Luo Binghe in the abyss, Shen Qingqiu grew desperate. He would do anything, anything to avoid Human Stick ending.
[Congratulations User! By completing the Eternal Abyss Arc- User is awarded a Double Point Package!]
“...Double point package?”
[It’s as it says! This System will request User to act out scenarios- an alpha test- and once completed will acquire points.]
“Okay, it’s not going to make me throw anymore disciples into the Abyss?” he asked
[No, only user and System will be in these scenarios. And the scenario stage will be locked so no other user will be able to see or interfere.]
Hmm.
“What are the requests?”
And he almost spat blood at the video compilations, all the thumbnails were glitched out and locked but the title caption told him everything.
It was just straight up porn!
“Like hell I’m doing any of that!”

Emergency: this fic was posted to a third party website without my consent can people please report it or I will have to delete this fanfic the link is on the last chapter

Notes:

Just a self-indulgent smut fic of what would happen if the System made Shen Qingqiu do things for points. Such as sex. And even gave him the Happy Ending Package! If he does this and accumulates enough points Binghe WON’T Kill him and will return to Qing Jing Peak as his disciple!
With five years to prepare, of course Shen Qingqiu clicked yes.
…Without reading the fine print.

 

A bit too much information but god is it annoying being ace 🙃 I’m suddenly inspired to write a smutty fiction and think Hmm I wonder why? To realise that my body is working against me and going hey! You want a baby! Boom period. And I realise Ah that’s why I’m writing smutty fiction. But guess what after it’s over I’m sex repulsed so imagine reading back over my own work not seeing the appeal? I feel like Jekyll and Hyde. But now I’m stuck with a smut fic and have to wait to get in the mood to finish it.

(See the end of the work for more notes.)

Chapter 1: Exposition!

Chapter Text

With Luo Binghe in the abyss, Shen Qingqiu grew desperate. He would do anything, anything to avoid Human Stick ending.

 [Congratulations User! By completing the Eternal Abyss Arc- User is awarded a Double Point Package!]

“...Double point package?”

[It’s as it says! This System will request User to act out scenarios- an alpha test- and once completed will acquire points.]

“Okay, it’s not going to make me throw anymore disciples into the Abyss?” he asked sceptically, and a bite.

[No, only user and System will be in these scenarios. And the scenario stage will be locked so no other user will be able to see or interfere.]

Hmm. 

“What are the requests?”

And he almost spat blood at the video compilations, all the thumbnails were glitched out and locked but the title caption told him everything.

 It was just straight up porn!

“Like hell I’m doing any of that!”

[If thats what user wishes, but if he denies this request, the happy ending package will be lost.]

“Happy ending?”

It showed the package, a small preview clip of Binghe returning to the Peak, a happy disciple and being embraced in Shen Qingqius arms.

 [The Happy ending arc includes, no human stick ending, returned disciple. Luo Binghe will continue being a disciple of Qing Jing Peak with his beloved Shizun!]

…Damn it.

 “Okay fine.”

[Very well, the tutorials are for training only and to calibrate user settings and to make the scenario more fulfilling and richer!]

“Meaning?”

[User will be able to feel the experiences as if it was real, to create a more realistic reaction! Better reactions mean more additional points!]

“What are the points?”

…And is this worth it?

[1200 points for tutorial]

Fucking shit, really? And thats JUST for a tutorial!?

“How much is happy ending?”

[500,000 points. If User creates more than 100 videos with the live reaction additional points then he can succeed the mission before the five year mark]

Okay, what were the prompts?

 

 

These missions…christ.

To think he had to farm points this way, virgin simulator, sensitivity simulation…

[User has to begin Virgin simulator and experiencing losing all of his firsts with this System.]

Okay so, kissing, then blowjobs wait-

[There are other genitals as well, there is a wide diversity of this system.]

Shen Qingqiu inhaled, he was going to have to suck a potential vagina?

 [This system can change the system settings] He flinched to see a realistic dick, vagina and a cross between the two, or even demon dicks and demon vaginas.

 How diverse.

[Thank you! this simulation was created for all target demographics :D]

So the Virgin simulator, it had a ton of videos in its folder, Shen Qingqius first kiss, his experience with different types of kissing such as a peck on the cheek, pressing their lips together, tongue, biting his lip, biting the other's lip…

Oh so he had to initiate some and then let the other initiate.

He activated the video and felt the whole room change, as green code expanded out as if scanning the room and his whole room changed into a green tint.

 “System?”

[This is the Scenario box. This is so User does not confused the Scenarios for realty and end up taken advantage of] 

 Oh that was lovely.

[Also, would User like the realistic model?]

Shen Qingqiu flinched as a body appeared before him, first a man, in flesh, naked.

Shen Qingqiu face burned red-he can see everything! And why a man!?

[Or would he like the fanservice- disembodied look?]

 It was just a green less detailed version, it had all the parts easily enough and was a transparent green. Almost like the game detroit become human, or those mangas that had disembodied faces, hands, etc.

 And it didn’t have a face, and for some reason Shen Qingqiu was fine with that.

 

[Alright! User has selected avatar for his partner! Now time to initiate Virgin Kiss Simulator!]

Wait…how many Virgin simulators were there?

 [It’s the tutorial, don’t worry User will be compensated points!]



[{    ATTENTION VALUED READERS AND CUSTOMERS THE FOLLOWING IS THE VIRGIN SIMULATOR SCENARIO WITH A BASELINE AVATAR! TO PROGRESS ONTO SCENARIO.

 

 SELECT OR SCROLL TO THE ‘VIDEO’ OF YOUR CHOOSING. WE HOPE OUR USERS ENJOY THIS EXPERIENCE! IF USER COULD KINDLY LEAVE A KUDOS THAT WOULD TRANSFER INTO A POINT FOR OUR HOST- AND LEAVE A COMMENT TO REQUEST A ‘SCENARIO’ FOR OUR HOST SHEN QINGQIU!!!

IF YOU WISH TO KEEP PROGRESSING THIS SCENARIO, CONTINUE READING AND ENJOY:

 VIRGIN SIMULATOR: SHEN QINGQIU!   }]

 

 Level one! Initiator! Shen Qingqius first kiss!

It had a green title above of what he had to do and sighed as he leaned close, and pecked him on the side of its mouth.

 The system gave a little ding sound of points, then he pressed his lips against the unmoving lips of the avatar.

 Ding!

Then…then tongue.

When he pushed his tongue past, eyes squeezed shut, he could feel teeth, and  the avatars unresponsive tongue, even for the basic model it was detailed enough for the important parts.

 And Shen Qingqiu wondered how long he had to do this…the point system didn’t ding yet…

As he pushed further, his hands raising up to hold the bodys shoulders, he flicked his tongue against the others swirling it around, before pulling back. Was that good enough?

Ding!

Oh it was belated.

[Now Scum villain scenario!]

Huh?

[Grab his face and tongue fuck the victim!] what!? Like- like he was-!

[Double points!]

 

Goddamit, grabbing the body's face and pinching the mouth open and dove in, with the systems instructions did as he was told, biting the tongue and pulling it back out to suck on, then pushed back in slyvia dripping down the avatars mouth, it didn’t make a sound, which thank god.

 He bit it’s lip, then pulled on his lip, and then continued to experiment, the body and system gave hints if he was kissing good or not, by the sounds of the point dings , or when the body switched pressing closer, and he followed its directions.

The system watched raking up points silently watching as it trained Shen Qingqiu to be the best service Host ever.

 Shen Qingqiu was adapting really well, the system could have asked for a better host.

[Changing initiator!] Shen Qingqiu was already light headed from all that kissing, his skin flushed and lips red from the spit.

 The system waited a moment, and then had the body repeat back the same to him when it was the bodys turn to initiate.

 

Kissing the side of his mouth, Shen Qingqiu shivered, it felt…real all of a sudden.

But the visual had not changed.

 And it continued, at first Shen Qingqiu thought it was a mirror, just repeating what HE did which would probably help him improve faster if he saw good and what felt wrong.

But then realised it was different, when it bit him it kept gnawing on his lip like a dog, Shen Qingqiu whimpered, sounds coming out his throat by accident and he tried to keep them back.

 And it…was a much better kisser than him, sometimes it was bad but sometimes the tongue went places that had Shen Qingqiu’s knees buckling, trying to keep up as their tongues danced.

 [Open your mouths wider, let us see everything.]

 

 Shen Qingqiu shut his eyes, but did as he was told, opening his mouth as he was still kissed, his his tongue kept undulating against the others, breathing harshly through his nose.

 Once that was done and the system was satisfied, green hands grabbed his jaw in a bruising grip, Shen Qingqius hands latched up, scratching against the wrist as he felt his jaw creek, tears building in his eyes from the pain as he shifted trying to move away, before a tongue forced it’s way past his mouth he tried to keep it shut, but the fingers pried it apart, as it ravished his cavern and bullied it’s way inside-

This was way too intense!

 

Then it let go of his face and the system told him not to respond keep his tongue lax, as if he was being forced, a thrill ran up his spine but he kept his face neutral and devoid, as the avatar did whatever it wanted to his mouth.

 [Now open your mouth wider!]

Huh? Why? 

Even so, he still did it, his mind foggy and face red, his lips puffy and bruised from being kiss bitten.

 And the Avatar spat in his mouth, Shen Qingqiu swallowed by mistake- thank god it didn’t taste weird but even so- his eyes flashing in outrage-

 

“What the HELL!? I didn’t do that to the avatar! what was-”

[Double points! Main mission 1200pts. Additional bonuses 50+ 50+ 20+ 20+ calculating…] He saw the numbers moving up eyes wide, 1340 points!

 Usually he was lucky to get a mission for a hundred points that was…this was.

He might actually get his happy ending.

 “Hey system, is there anyway to see the details of a mission?” That spitting part caught him of guard.

 “Until certain parameters have been met, descriptions will be unlocked until then. Don’t worry this system will compile scenarios that have that criteria to unlock that feature!]

Oh, great. But until then, he had to make it past the tutorial.

There were more kisses, one where Shen Qingqiu had to fight against the person, scratching their face and biting their tongue, and vice versa as he forced himself on someone else. Why these scenarios? But there was a contrast of being sweet and kissing the like he loved them. Then there was a timer, with Shen Qingqiu in the other lap and had to continue kissing until the timer ran out, he’d thought he would get tired but found that the prolonged kissing wasn’t problematic at all. But the more they kissed the more…he started to react, his cheeks burned as he felt himself harden from all these kisses!

[Congrats! Congrats! Kissing until Shen Qingqiu is hard is complete!]

 

[Congratulations! Kissing Shen Qingqiu for the first time Mission has been complete!]

 

Now that the Kissing Tutorial ended, he was given more tasks;

[First handjob simulation! One for him and one for her!] Shen Qingqiu pursued his lips, “Lets go with her first,” He has experience with his own …ahem. But he figured a womens downstairs would be more difficult as he’s never done it before.

 [System will now introduce dialogue for each first time] 

Huh?

And what Shen Qingqiu didn’t know, was that the system removed his memory, how else can the system get an accurate portrayal for each of his firsts?

 

 It had Shen Qingqiu give hand jobs for both the first time, from all angles, when he was behind, the front, or from the side.

 And he had no instruction, he had to watch and observe how the body's reacted and changed his pace if they got more wet or not, his wrist growing tired.

 

Now with dialogue the system can create a new scenario, of the him/her variations.

 The rough demoness that critiqued him harshly calling him all sorts of derogatory names until he finally figured it out, and when she gave the little “Adequate.”

He felt warmth and a flush stain his cheeks from the little praise.

…He’s no a masochist.
The sweet maiden who would encourage him. Other types of generic personalities…

 

It was the same with male demon and Humans, the demon strangely enough would be encouraging as Shen Qingqiu’s hands would fumble trying to stroke a large weirdly shaped cock, with ribs and tried to quickly jerk him off for the points, and it was the human that spouted abuse, calling him pathetic, lecherous, that for a man obsessed with brothels and had long fingers he sure was useless at it.

 Shen Qingqiu's face flamed red, scowling down at this imaginary person, he was anxious and ashamed, and ended up going too fast or too slow.

 But he finally got through it. 

Sweat beading down his brow, his wrists aching.

 

Then it got a bit more…invasive.

Shen Qingqiu was on his knees staring up at the open slit of a demoness pelvic area.

 Her cunt right in front of his face, he swallowed. 

And this was without the Systems instructions, he had to feel and figure it out for himself, he can use his hands and mouth…

She was also…big, muscular thighs, six pack stomach, large arms and breasts. She could probably snap him in half.

 And Shen Qingqiu figured he should feel emasculated, but didn’t feel any sort of way about it.

 

Before he could get hung up on the details, he realised when a clawed green hand held his head and pulled him closer, it had a voice emulator.

 It sounded generated and soft, but it helped him figure out what he was meant to do. Not only her body language but he also listened to her, if her breathing was becoming laboured, if she hummed or moaned.

 As he was pulled closer he tentatively licked up her slit, his wet tongue catching on the hood of her clit, and felt her twitch, her muscular thighs clenching, his hand grasped one in a hold, licking upwards again, his tongue poking forward a little, feeling her twitch and leak fluid. 

 He noticed a small lump at the hood, and his tongue licked it and around it, she gasped harshly her claws grasping his head and grinded her cunt against his face, Shen Qingqiu choked, his mouth and nose wet as she used his face to get off.

 Taking that as a good thing, he pushed his tongue in deeper, and sucked at her vulva.

She shuddered, and Shen Qingqiu grunted as he felt his head pulled back as she stood above him, she was standing over his face entirely, his face pulled upwards as he clasped her leg and ass, his tongue still lapping at the skin and pushing in deeper.

 Her moans kept being consistent, it was good but not enough to push her all the way…

The system watched as Shen Qingqiu didn’t use his hands, only sucking then thrusting his tongue inside, pushing it deeper and almost gagged as more fluid coated his face, and her insides clenched around his tongue as he flexed it back and forth, then his tongue pressed against a certain point, she moaned. And it encouraged him to continue doing what he was doing, when her hands clutched his hair and grinded against his face, Shen Qingqiu heard her moans become louder and louder along with the ding! Of the point simulator, seeing it as a video game made him not look too closely at what he was doing, his face wet, and tongue growing numb.

 But when she cried out, her hips twitching, and Shen Qingqiu could taste something and swallowed, moving his tongue slowly, riding it out before finishing.

 Suddenly as the avatar moved it grabbed his hair and pulled his head back further, he grunted look up at it in pain, and confusion, what-

 There was a hum, before it flickered away in pixels and the system took over, yelling its congratulations.

 That wasn’t too bad, for his first time cunninglingus.

Oh- oh crap he needed to suck a dick next! Goddamit. 

 

Move up before virgin simulator///

////What Shen Qingqiu did not know, is that the Systems package was a two-way system. Inquiry to other users to make requests of the model Shen Qingqiu.

 And each different variation of PIDW was given this magic mirror that experience fucking Shen Qingqiu in different ways.

 The Demoness Luo Binghe, who after being exposed was almost killed by her Scum Shizun and vowed revenge, she was just going to kill him but that apparition…

 Shen Qingqiu deserved being on his knees, forced to bring her pleasure…

Maybe being flexible and capturing Shen Qingqiu as a concubine, seeing a man like that humiliated, on his knees it would destroy him better than ripping his arms off.

 And her blood parasites would make him well behaved.

She requested the Mirror if there were any more like what she experienced, it only told her it had a limited supply so far but more requests would be made. But warned her that only a few would be catered to her preferences…unless she made requests.

 “Requests?”

[Yes valued customer! If you asked this System for a prompt, then Shen Qingqiu may deliver!”

“Why would he not?” 

Why did this system say ‘may?’

 

[This Shen Qingqiu is not your Shen Qingqiu. Just a world where Shen Qingqiu was kind-]

Pfft, really? One actually existed?

The system showed, She looked wide eyed as a soft looking Shen Qingqiu was helping a boy raise his sword and even laughed when the boy stumbled into him, patting his head.

 Luo Binghe watched, feeling something in her chest go cold.

“If this Binghe was a boy, she would have been accepted?”

[No. This Shen Qingqiu only knows that Binghe you see before you, but the Shen Qingqiu on a world similar to this one would have been kind to a Luo Binghe who was a women]

Luo Binghe looked down, “Is there anyway to turn my worlds Shen Qingqiu like that? To make him look at me like that?”

[This System has a Happy End Package, full of points! User currently has 600pts for all of her wives! :D But needs more than 50,000 more to purchase this ending]

Hmmm…

“And how do I get these points?”

[If user enters our Beta Test program, like She had done before, and experiences each Shen Qingqiu experience will accumulate more points, this system will also convert the 50,000 points to videos.]

She saw the point change to videos…thousands of locked videos.

[Each request you make and more points you spend, the more videos, when you unlock the 50,000 video that will trigger the Happy End event and you will be gifted a king Shizun!]

She figured, how could she get points if she had to pay them for requests? Also, strange how the points turned into videos for her to consume which means…

 This system needs some type of energy from her, and it takes that energy when she’s in that illusion.

But she feels fine…she wonders if this is like Duel Cultivating. No harm done, and if she gets her own Shizun.

“Deal.”

 

[Pleasure doing business with you. :D ]