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  1. Lonewolf54321 on Chapter 1 Mon 08 Jun 2026 06:49PM UTC

    We love the chaos first off. Also cliche stories are almost always the best (at least when coming from you they are, because when I saw you posted smth new I was just immediately like, hmm this will be good I gotta check this out)

    Rn I will bet that there was miss communication and that led to Oscar thinking Lando cheated on him. Or somebody lied to Oscar about Lando cheating just so they could get closer to Oscar.

    I also love the fact how Oscar is just casually skipping class. He is totally someone important and Lando just doesn’t know because he’s not actually rich and it’s only his mum.

    I also love the fact that we have a kind empathetic Lando who would prefer to be with someone he loves and cares about then go for the money.

    Also the fact that you made Lando’s mum the one who was abusive to the dad is just lovely as so many people act like that doesn’t ever happen so it’s just great to see being represented.

    I guess cheers to a new story! (I really gotta finish reading your omegaverse one as I’m at chapter 41 but I just keep forgetting to continue reading and it’s just ahh. So good honestly)

    Anyway have a lovely rest of your evening (?)

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    1. Aylinmd on Chapter 1 Tue 09 Jun 2026 12:00AM UTC

      Hi there my lovely lovely sweet reader<3333

       

      I'm so glad you read this ;)))

       

      Omg I'm becoming so predictable am I not? Jwkakajakqlq

       

      Haha yep, rich kid privilege apparently (I'm jealous of the character I wrote not gonna lie)

       

      And God you're doing it again I love that you notice everythinggggg
      Actually at first Lando was living with his mum then I was like wait a f second I have to change it haha

       

      Girl tbh I'm planning to read that story to edit it for months and I can't because its so f longggg so good luck with that 👀

       

      Thank youuuu😽🧡
      You too<333

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      1. Lonewolf54321 on Chapter 1 Tue 09 Jun 2026 06:06AM UTC

        Hello there dear lovely author <33

        Yes and no, also predictability is good for our heart somewhat.

        I feel everyone can and will be jealous of a rich kid at some point, it shows just how rich the child is so it’s important to feel the jealousy.

        I’m happy I’m observant enough to notice the details.
        And changing it to be that Lando is with his dad was just such a lovely detail. It just makes sense.

        Yeah that’s fair, but also editing is painful, because if you accidentally skim something you are just like fucked. The length is the reason I’m procrastinating that story so honestly fair.

        Thank you <33

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        1. Aylinmd on Chapter 1 Tue 09 Jun 2026 01:43PM UTC

          Thank YOU

           

          and btw I wanted to ask you something

          So in this story, I'm not sure who Lando’s dad should be

          Like I thought about Nico, Seb but I wasn't sure
          Would it fit?

           

          Or should it just be like a random name?

           

          Sorry to bother you with my questions akaqhkqoq

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          1. Lonewolf54321 on Chapter 1 Tue 09 Jun 2026 02:26PM UTC

            Both Nico and Seb would be amazing. I feel like it’s easier to portray Nico as his dad though just because of how there’s a bit more that you can grab from the real world.

            I’m honoured to be asked such a question so don’t worry bout it!

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            1. Aylinmd on Chapter 1 Tue 09 Jun 2026 02:32PM UTC

              Nico then.
              Thank youuuuu mwah<333

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    3. Fantasy_bookwyrm on Chapter 1 Tue 09 Jun 2026 02:01PM UTC

      Bad boy Oscar 😏😏skipping class and flirting with boys in the hallway

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      1. Lonewolf54321 on Chapter 1 Tue 09 Jun 2026 02:27PM UTC

        Some boys are just like that sadly

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