Comment on Matters of the Heart and Other Vital Signs

  1. victoriousscarf Sat 09 Mar 2013 01:21AM UTC

    Hey, look at me reading Avengers fic for the first time in months (But I will always, always have a soft spot for Clint).

    I really adore the slow build of this, and Phil's utter interest in his health as opposed to Clint, who plays very fast and loose with his own safety (It's not that he's actively self destructive like Tony Stark can be, he just forgets that taking care of himself matters too). Annnd I just really enjoy the slow build and Phil and yes, lovely work over all. (And I love Phil's promise to his Captain America poster I mean really).

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    1. lamentforboromir Fri 15 Mar 2013 05:39AM UTC

      Thank you! Your comments mean so much to me, really. (And wow, I haven't read Avengers fic in. Wow. I don't even know.)

      I'm glad you liked the slow build. I was author worried that it wasn't convincing, or seemed rushed, so your comment makes me feel better. :) And the health thing is what started this story. Phil would be a health nut, completely in control of his body. And then Clint happens. And suddenly, Phil doesn't have that control. (Or, y'know, supposedly.)

      Thank you for reading!

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      1. victoriousscarf Fri 15 Mar 2013 06:13AM UTC

        You're welcome! I really enjoyed reading these! (I know. It's like, if it's put in front of me I go OOOH CLINT but I haven't searched for it in ages).

        I like slow builds. Like, really like them. And I just love the contrast between Phil's health and Clint.

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