*crying* YOU ACTUALLY WROTE ANOTHER ONE! Oh my god, I could lose it. The only thing that I was confused about was Johnny suddenly going from supportive in the previous one to anti-Spideypool in this one, but I loved it - you actually got in-depth with the issues that they're dealing with, that a relationship based on tacos and banter and sex isn't 100% healthy. Ugh, you're just my favorite writer, and I was actually re-reading the previous one when I got the message that this had updated. Thanks so much!
OF COURSE I DID! i honestly can't get enough of them, i don't know how i stayed away for so long. i think the johnny bit was a little too much in my head. he was still supportive in this one, but once it started to look like peter was in an abusive relationship, he was worried. if there hadn't been that issue, i'm fairly certain he would have been the same as in the previous one, but i may have not really gone into detail for that well enough, :/ thank you for pointing that out, though! i'll definitely go back and give it a look! oh, thank you, :D i was so worried that this one was a little too serious in comparison to the last one, but i did really want to look at their issues as a couple because you're right, tacos, banter, and sex isn't all there is. the next one will get a little fluffier again now that they're kind of over that huge thing, though it will still definitely be looking at them growing up together, but anyway, i'm getting off track--thank you so, so much! ♥
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