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  1. sleeponrooftops Tue 03 Jun 2014 08:19PM UTC

    oh, i'm so pleased to hear that you think so, :) i struggled a lot with some of the things that happened in this fic, though mainly what johnny had to say to peter. i never intended for him to be the bad guy, and really, he isn't. aside from trying to get peter to cheat with him--though, really, peter hadn't seen wade in how many months? it was kind of reasonable at that point to assume that they weren't dating anymore--johnny was very honest with peter, and i think it opened peter up to realizing what was going on with his relationship with wade.

    thank you so much! i strive to make everything believable, so it's a very high compliment that you think so, :)

    i don't necessarily know if i'd consider it dub-con or sexual assault, though. they have this weird past where this has been a thing between them, and though peter didn't want it ultimately, i think, had he understood how unhealthy his relationship with wade was at that point, he may have let it happen. i don't know, that's just my take on it. i'm not sure johnny would have gone much farther if peter kept pushing him away, either. i do see where you're coming from, though.

    thank you so much! :) i hope you enjoy the third one, if you haven't read it already!

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    1. CAPSING Thu 05 Jun 2014 09:55AM UTC

      You're most welcome! I indeed enjoyed the third part, I left a comment there as well :)

      Thank you for explaining the point with Johnny. In my views, no means no and shouldn't be repeated - this is why I really liked Wade asking for Peter's consent in the first part - but I understand you as well.

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      1. sleeponrooftops Thu 05 Jun 2014 02:23PM UTC

        i totally agree. no does mean no and shouldn't be repeated, absolutely, and i often worry when writing those scenes, trying to make sure that i'm not taking things too far.

        i apologize for not remembering your comment! i just went back to check. this is going to sound awfully pretentious, but i get so many for the college au that i'm writing that i forget who has said what where. thank you again! :)

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        1. CAPSING Thu 05 Jun 2014 03:04PM UTC

          hehe, no trouble. Doesn't sound pretentious at all :) Welcome again!

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